I'm trying to be happy
And to thank God for all I got
Trying TO always be me
Because I have a lot
I have a good, big family yes,
We work together to get things done
The youngest ones are a mess
But we always try to have fun
I have some friends who care
They love me for what I am and
Always tells me what is fair
Even if sometimes they drag me by hand
I know and love Christ so much
I want to show others the light
You have to follow a hunch
Search for an answer with all your might
I have so much
To be thankful for
I truly have a bunch
I really can't ask for more.
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Written May 28th, 2004
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God's Love is Amazing!
It's great becuase God always puts us in situations that will better ourselves! I think it is awesome how thankful you are for your huge family and such! God Bless you! ~Zak~ -
Thank you very much!
~julia~ -
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aww, this is a very sweet poem. Yes, I agree it is very optimistic and positive! Good job in expressing your life and everything you have. I wish I could be more like that. Well thanks for responding to my poem! Keep gracing us with your poetic beauty! -
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Great job friend!
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Excellent
Extremely pleasant awesome job keep letting your light shine! God Bless you always.
Soulfully Yours,
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hey very nice poem! lot of meaning! anywyas gtg peace!
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wow, this is a great poem.. optimistic, and has a real positive message. I think it does us all wonders if we could just stop for a few minutes in our lives and think about all that we have, instead of focus on what we don't. It's a pity that we miss out on so much just because we fail to look at it.. sometimes until it's too late.
This is one amazing write! Keep it up
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Hey!!! this is a nice piece!! great job...! byes! always, Sam
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