You are the painter
Life is your canvas
Mold it into whatever you want it to be
You are the writer
The page is your escape
Tell your tale
You are the potter
I'm the clay
Make me into what you want me to be
You are my salvation
I'm your son
Show me the way
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Written May 28th, 2004
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Neat! I love to place my hand in the Father's and let Him lead.
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great poem
hey dreamer
nice poem i love it but "make me into what you want me to be"???
why??? keep it up -
this is very beautiful and very well written...i feel as if you are talking directly to me...i don't agree with one line however, the "Make me into what you want me to be", i think you and only you should control who and what you are...thanks for sharing and keep it up
take care
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This was really beautiful!! It had a good flow and the words ran perfectly together!!! PROPS!!
Always,
Lucky
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very very very good
hey I loved your poem so much emotion but oh so simple it has so much spirituality in it and I loved it thanks for your comment on my poem called My Thoughts and maybe Chris just maybe I will scream your name lol if the change ever presents itself
much love
floeticone
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Sweet
This poem was inspirational, but it doesn't force your opinion about God or religion. I like that.
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very very nice work. i love it. its so simple and makes so much sense. And it has so much meaning and spirituality inside of it..... awesome. keep it up!
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I like this poem. Im not so well at comments so dont be mad ducks yes I really like this poem probally the first I actually read that I commented..^_^ I like it is is great your a great writer.
Always,
The Biting Elf
Nikki -
he will show you the way....
like shephard that watch his flocks by night...
he will lead you into truth..show you his way...hold your hands...and saves you...
he is not the one whom picks you up when you fall...He is the one whom never let you fall at all.
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