Eclipsed in shadows, binded in darkness
One with the unseen
Darkness incarnate, movements cloaked
Existence a smokescreen
You know not of me, yet i know you
Your visage haunts my mind
You're poison's running through my system
This sickness is divine
I'll bide my time so patiently
And strike when i see fit
You're the cure for my disease
I will not falter, will not quit
Sanity has left my side
Replaced with fuelled desire
You've stained my thoughts without regard
Secluded i conspire
I'll consume you whole, without remorse
To feed my sickened soul
Appeased for now, my mind's at ease
Complete yet never whole.
Author notes
Written May 28th, 2004
A contest entry
- Show Me What You've Got by LostParamour.
500 points, ended September 16, 2004, 61 entries
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Wonderful! I love your work! I wish mine was half that good! WOW!
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amazingly written as i am finding to be a usual thing for you ,i think this is bloody brillient just like the other stuff ive read
laura -
Fantastic. Absolutely gorgeously written. I really like this poem. The message and feel was great. Congratulations again on a really good poem.
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This was really really good..The feel of it was really nice too..Again good write..I will be reading more of your work..And don't feel bad if no one reads your poems cause no one reads mine..
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yep...turned out just beautiful (like i knew it would)...i'm getting the feeling that no one reads your poems because you aren't getting any feedback!! oh well...awesome job Mikey
-peace-
whit
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