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Math is my least easy subject, when i was in the eigth grade my math teacher was Mr. Bell-Towne. in

Math is my least easy subject, when i was in the eigth grade my math teacher was Mr. Bell-Towne. in his class i was actually looking up from my book more than occasionaly to listen to him teach. by the end of the year i only looked down from my book when i was done with the work assigned. Mr. Bell-Towne was so pimpin, he even played D&D, we were going to set up a D&D club but i was graduated to the ninth grade with a B average in his class. Mr. Bell-Towne might not have been re-hired but he probably was. If anyone ever said they hated math they probably never had Mr. Bell-Towne, the only word in the english language that could define the utter genius of Mr. Bell-Towne compressed into the flesh and blood of the human body would be: Pimpin, utterly Pimpin.

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Written May 27th, 2004

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  • Barbara gold member
    May 29, 2004
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    No idea what 'Pimpin' means either.

    I agree with NurseHayley in breaking this up, since the contest criteria is a minumum of ten lines. And adding some grammatical changes would benefit(Capital letters in certain places, etc)

    Welcome to Allpoetry and good luck with the contest
    Edited on May 29, 10:23 p.m. because ''.


  • NurseHayley
    May 29, 2004
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    This would benefit from being arranged into stanzas because at the moment you are just telling a story so it's hard to see it as a poem. However I am glad that this techer helped and inspired you so much
    Good luck and thanks for entering
    Hayley x x


  • rufina caraid gold member
    May 29, 2004
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    Not too sure what 'Pimpin' means - maybe you cold teach me lol
    However I see the message for your teacher here and I like it. I was hopeless at Maths and bless the calculator in so many ways. Worthy tribute to your teacher. thank you for entering and good luck.
    Welcome to AP
    ~Von~