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Bubble Gum Pink

Sometimes I am a cute, bubble-gum pink
   bursting with excitement and kiddish laughter
   like a child picked right out of a fairy tale.
Other times I am dead, crumpled-leaf brown
   dragging myself to get along the gloomy day,
   hoping its end will come soon,
   so that I can be a cute, bubble-gum pink again
   with no worries or cares in my mind.

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Written May 27th, 2004

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  • TanyaB
    July 24, 2004
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    awwww cute! well i hope you're pink every day
    (i see, to have developed a sudden craving for bubble gum ...hmmmm...)

  • jenni3
    July 6, 2004
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    Poo-ti-ful!

    Aw i like this one! Its berry good. It describes you well, of course i mean the bubble gum pink part. the poopie brown crumple leaf parts a no go type of thing, and plus when you have those moods you talk to mua! and then it's my job to help you make it all better cuz you are like my bestest friend in the hole wide world! so when you are in pain i feel it man. so when you feel crumple poopie brown leafish you be sure that you remember to holla at your sista over here and we sort this shiznat out and we fix it up and make you feel better.and plus you shouldn't feel to icky very often at all no more acuz you have mr. kyle now teehee. nice boy. better yet if he actually does stop the not very good habbit that he is trying to quit for you (awww by the way on that one) and yes. but getting back to the facts now you did a wonderful job writing this one my darling keep your wonderful mind working write more stuff and write more often lol love you babycakes!!!

    Jenn


  • SaraLynn
    June 9, 2004
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    real cute.. i like again the thing behind it.. its cute and i like of what it was.. it wasnt messed up morbid humor.. it was that lil cute innocent bubble gum pink humor.. *giggles* nice job~!


  • brittanyann5
    May 27, 2004
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    Thank you very much I wrote it last year in english class cause we were supposed to relate ourselves to colors..and I just got all of these poems back this year so I decided to post them all hehe
    ~Brittany


  • Energizer Bunny
    May 27, 2004
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    I love this. For some unknown reason it gives me a good feeling inside. I guess I can relate to the inner thoughts it gives me. You were so expressive.

    Very nicely done. Simple, pure, and filled with smiles.

    I hope to see more of your works...

    Read you later,
    Wayne

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