I thought I was alone in this world,
Destined to solitude.
I dreamed of peace and happiness,
but only tears ensued.
Love was something for someone else
That's what my fate would be.
But that all changed when I met you
I knew that God loved me.
From heaven you were sent to me,
My lonely walk had ceased.
No longer did my poor heart hunger,
My sorrow was released.
To think the timing of your birth
Was planned so long ago.
God loved me, and gave me you
He watches our love grow.
Author notes
This is a poem based on the Five for Fighting lyric:
"I can't say what I might believe
But if God made you he's in love with me"
Written May 27th, 2004
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Beautiful
I love the honesty in this poem. -
awesome poem, so beautifully written...also love the background (being a music lover)
Good luck -
Very Nice
This poem is definitely beautiful. I love the background and I like how your poem moves from showing a persons personal heartache to showing new hope and love. Great write and good luck in the contest!
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Aww this is a lovely piece. It sounds similar to a comment Steven made to me about believing life is worth it as God gave him to me, or found me for him. It's a really sweet lyric and piece. This is a lot of love for one person and I can tell you are blessed to have this person.
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Silly Little Love Songs
Thank you for entering my contest. I love that you wrote this from a lyric. I try to do that in my work as well. It flowed well. It was alittle predictable, but most poems written like this are. It wasn't to sappy and it wasn't to boring. Just enough. Beautiful idea. Great job! Good luck!
Stephanie -
Another truely beautiful and touching write. You my friend have alot of love in your heart. I realy enjoy reading your work.
love and hugs
~Lena~ -
Great flow, rhyme, rythm, I'm sorry I can't criticise...
Isi. -
Very Very VERY wonderfully written.. i really liked the lyric you chose... i'll have to check out the song... thanx for entering my contest and good luck!
Much Love,
Emily
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