Here we are
outside with the rain pouring down
Both of us, soaking wet
and not just from the rain...
He did not succeed at removing my bra
and I had not yet gotten to his pants...
He looked off the the side of the yard
and began to grin
There was a tent
Had he set this up?
We stepped into the tent
and there are candles lit up
I keep on thinking,
"How did he pull this off?"
There's a cot set up
and some wine...
There are rose peddles
laid out on the cot
I giggle a little as he takes my hand
he runs it up and down his body
i'm getting more and more excited
He tries once again to take off my bra,
"Do you need help?" I ask.
"oh shut your mouth" he replies
as he lets me take over.
off comes the bra,
and I begin to work on his pants
He is already very much excited
he starts by kissing my neck
then up my chin and to my ear
I can't resist him any more
and I grab his face and kiss him
long and hard...
to be continued...
Author notes
heehe./.. this is beginning to be fun!
Written May 26th, 2004
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sounds like you enjoy ur selve when you write thats how u r suppose to feel express ur self
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now your teasing us.. write more, you've got a great start
(and same adive on the color and the candle thing)
-mell -
This is what I am looking for! I love this - arousing yet not too graphic - makes you want more --Would you please look at some of my little poems I'm trying something new and i just don't know if its any good or not -- it would be helpful to have your input if you don't mind -- (be gentle?) thx
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Yes, be very careful with candles in a tent....extreme fire hazard. Haha. And the color, you should lighten it up a bit, or darken it so people can read it
Sounds romantic, I can't wait to read the rest, please leave me a note when you have the rest up?
-Heather -
oh man this is getting good cant wait for the next.
change the color it is hard to see. -
u need to cahnge the color i cant see it
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Candles in a tent....hmmmmmm.....I hope there's a sprinkler system in there as well. A circus tent? Well OK
Fire Marshall Marcellus
Looking good! Can't wait for more. -
this is funfun...
write more please!!
>>>Malaria<<<
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