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The wolves and the bears and disposable
witch have allied to dispel
the human-made myth.
They are not the sole antagonists.
The myths and the fables and fairy tales
have maligned them for life.
Sweet Little Red and the girl who devours
blood-red apples have begun a campaign of defamation.
Now pause to think twice; is a young girl, living
with seven sexually frustrated dwarves, quite so naïve?

Author notes

Same as.  A slight inversion of the old fairy tale myths.
Written May 26th, 2004

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  • Yemassee gold member
    October 12

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    I don't know if this is a random poem or that I just don't know the work that you are referencing, but it certainly a different poem for me. I do get the references to the seven dwarves, etc.

  • Nicole Hanna
    September 4, 2004
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    Is dwarf penii fixation such a bad thing? Wait... is penii even a word? Well, you used it first so I'll plagerize you for the time being. You said it in ten lines or less....fairy tales are the result of sexual frustration and sadism. Or is that just me?


  • GeGen DaeMon
    June 29, 2004
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    you girls are all very fixated with dwarf penii.

    I'd say that's more worrying than anything else....

  • IfOnlyLifeWereFair
    June 29, 2004
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    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!


  • June 6, 2004
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    dwarves are meant to have large willies arent they? or is that a myth as well?

    fair play to her i say


  • May 28, 2004
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    rofl ..sorry

  • -j-
    May 28, 2004
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    the mental picture of a hung dwarf just isnt right.... I'll never see dopey the same way again


  • May 28, 2004
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    Ok ..so she was a ho to the dwarves..what else is there to say? She can't be blamed..she was probably sexually frustrated herself and um ..maybe the dwarves were hung?

  • -j-
    May 27, 2004
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    hmmm. but those dwarves had eachother right? I think maybe they werent sexually frustrated at all. but snow white is still a ho ;-) love you

  • F Etc
    May 27, 2004
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    lol you stole that from shrek didnt you

    'snow white, just cos she lives with seven men, doesnt mean shes easy!'

    ah no comments. sorry mine's shit.

    Jadey xXxXx

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