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every day is a new day....bollox



Every day is a new day,
so they say...

Don't dream of tomorrow,
it'll only bring sorrow...

Yesterday has been and gone,
same shit, same song...

If every day is new,
why are they always blue...

ali-p

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every day is a new day my arse...!!!
Written May 26th, 2004

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  • scaryXmissXmary
    June 1, 2004
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    Thankyou hunni xxx

    this is good. Fuck the cliche kinda thing. The anti-hallmark moment. I like this. Well done xxx


  • yumanbeing
    May 28, 2004
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    I am book marking this -
    says what needs to be said
    photo greeting card should be made of this with verse inside - would sell well


  • di ivers
    May 27, 2004
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    hey ali you got that right i agree that everyday is about the same the only diff is the day of the week and the numbers..love ya take care peace be with you always..
    good luck in the contest..

    ~~DI~~