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................................(silence)...............................

silence fills our world
every nook and cranny
it creeps into our lives
and somehow either strengthens us
or makes us weak and miserable
making us weak by shutting off
communication with our lover
making us stronger by helping us
keep quiet of past repressed memories
that would otherwise destroy us
silence fills our world
every nook and cranny
it creeps into our lives
closing the world you know
off from you knowledge
silence sweet everlasting silence
like the kind when you dead and lying in your coffin
peace comes with it too
silence fills our world
every nook and cranny
it creeps into our lives

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Written May 24th, 2004

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  • Ashes-Only-Remain
    January 3, 2005
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    Wow!!! great job, i thought it was very deep, and soulful!I agree silence.... its... nice!! lol keep up the great work i loved it.
    ^.^Amber^.^