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No reason

Where do you turn,
when the world's turned its back on you.
How do you find your way home,
when you never knew where it was.
Look me in the eyes,
and tell me another lie.
Sometimes I wish I would just die.
If I'm not here tomorrow,
will anyone even care.
I can't love, I can't even love myself.
I've been through enough,
to see happily ever afters,
and till forever ends,
are nothing but meaningless words.
So tell me I have a reason,
to still be standing here today.
When everything I've ever believed in.
Has all been swept away!

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Written May 24th, 2004

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  • EmoHero1321
    August 2, 2004
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    Who knew? Wait. I did. You always got me to talk to, that is unless your mad at me at the time, which is often.

  • Zealous
    May 25, 2004
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    this is really sad...but its a very good peice of writing ...thanx 4 sharing


  • LoveEssence
    May 24, 2004
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    Wow! Strong! Really hits the point! I liked it a lot. Very Wonderful write! I'm Impressed! you have great talent!
    LoveEssence


  • RollingStone silver member
    May 24, 2004
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    a sad poem. hope things get better.