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"Dear God"

Dear God I need your help
I hurt others even my self
I turned him down
NOW I want to die!
I think I just might cry
I don't care so you may not but if you do I will not regret that i took that second bet on second thought the bet i will not regret.

Author notes

I want a truthful reply and not a lie thank you for your time!
Written May 24th, 2004

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  • June 12, 2004
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    baffuling

    hey you this is john, i like the way you write,love you.

  • Button1991
    May 30, 2004
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    I know u dont get it some times i dont so we are even although, I turned some one down and now i feel bad!!!
    Burtton

  • Listina
    May 24, 2004
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    I like it but I don't get it.