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I want him!

I want him so bad
I can almost taste it
or shall I say him!

It has been a month
since our first meeting
This tall, dark hair, handsome man
a friend of my cousin's

We had a good time at the party
we got to know each other
before you know it we're walking around together
arms all over each other

we confess our feelings
that we hold for one another
before I know it
I'm back at his house

"How did this happen?"
I think to myself
but aw, hell, who cares?
we're about to fuck silly..

we throw open the door to his house
chase each other up and down the stairs
through the halls
and bouncing off the walls

kissing and licking and groping
we can't get to his bed fast enough
finally we reach our destination

by that time we're both barely clothed
he grabs my hand, and pulls me towards him
"Come here love" he whispers oh so sweetly in my ear.

I cannot resist and soon I'm on top of him
running my fingers through his hair
I'm kissing him all over
as he's working on getting my damn bra off me

we finally slow down
and stair into each others eyes
for what seems like an eternity
the rain is pouring down outside

We both look at the window,
and I can tell what he's thinking
"Let's go" he excitedly says
as he grabs my hand to go outside...


to be continued....


Author notes

it's just beginning.... and it's only my second piece... so gimme a break!! haha
Written May 24th, 2004

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  • Twisteddolly
    May 26, 2004
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    Nooo I need more I love the raIN....the idea in which you implying is just exctitng and sounds like fun...please inform me when part two is made!!!!

    ""as he's working on getting my damn bra off me"
    Aint that the truth...always that damn bra...it takes like three or four times and when we offer help! "no i'll get it!!!" 3 mins later...I got the fucker!!!>..hahah great write...

    Jessica


  • Crash Into Me
    May 26, 2004
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    Kinky
    >>>Malaria<<<


  • Marcellus
    May 25, 2004
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    Sounds great!
    Can't wait for the sequel.
    Marcellus

  • Dark Angelic
    May 25, 2004
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    9.5

    oh i can't wait it sounds really good you got me hooked. hurry!


  • foxykitten
    May 24, 2004
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    good

    "as he's working on getting my damn bra off me"

    hahahaha! that's a great line, ain't it tha truth tho? we put ours on while talking on tha phone eating and sandwhich and blindfolded, but rite when we need it to come off that damn thing won't come off!

    good write for your second time

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