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Divina Love that's me

Divina Love

Not solely a name
But a scared little girl
Withholding in the darkest corner of my mind

She bears the identity
Belonging to a perfect creature
A woman I will never grow to be

Divina identifies a divine being
An angel in the sky
A heavenly reflection
Not like my own mirror image
Which reveals an insecure spirit

Love is a warm emotion
I have never experienced
My core is numb and frozen
I desire for tenderness to melt my heart
But in my loveless solitude I must forever reside

Author notes

about how I created Divina love.
love D.L.
Written May 24th, 2004

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  • ViolentSerenity
    August 23, 2008

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    why must you be so low upon yourself?

    i love you dark work but this one begs a sadden emotion well put but i am sure you are or if not can be anything you speak of in this poem i love it though its pretty like a black rose in a garden of bleeding red if you can catch my gothic drift nice write.


  • Bitter Sweet Angel
    June 16, 2005
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    this is a lovely peice it shows how creative you are and its written so beautifully!!! good luck in my contest and thanks for entering!!!