I sometimes feel GUILTY
that I am still ALIVE, and
I know it's time to WALK AWAY
WHEN SUMMER'S GONE.
This was MADE FOR LOVING YOU,
please accept THE GIFT,
your such a delicate SWEET THING
let's try and MAKE IT HAPPEN.
THIS TEMPTATION and its evils,
AIN'T GOT YOU in their grip
SHE TOLD ME sincere and honestly
that she'd be BACK SOMEDAY.
WITHOUT YOU., I feel so lonely
please DON'T TREAT ME LIKE A FOOL
I'll be RIGHT HERE WAITING
I WANNA KNOW where our future lies.
NO GOODBYES, no last words
STAND UP and walk away
you always brought out the BEST IN ME
one day my soul will come BACK TO YOU...
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Author notes
a bit of fun for me thanx for excercising my grey matter...
Written May 23rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Challenge Hungry Contest by heather 802.
300 points, ended May 24, 2004, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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cheeky besom that I am...
I would like to thankyou Heather for the silver trophy. It was totally unexpected as I entered last minute as something to do and exercise the old grey matter.
Thanx Irilis...I feel kinda guilty now seeing as I took a trophy, when so many others went into this seriously...sorry!!! -
P.S
Hey Ali I just saw you won silver!!!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!! SORRY I DIDNT NOTICE BEFORE I commented on the poem lol.
Iris -
Lol, not bad, unique contest poem, good luck with it Ali,
keep up the good work. I can really compare with your first stanza, its inspired me to write, so thanks for that too.
Sincerely,
Iris
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