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Life of Love

Childhood crushes
Teenage first love
It's the hardest thing in the world
To have a broken heart
But we'll get over eachother
And both of us move on
Right now it feels like we're meant to be
And he's made to be with me
But such nonsense does grow old
And young people all grow up
But love to me does not die
And it makes me want to cry
The way some things can go so wrong
Even though the love felt so strong
This pain is too real
I need to be able to feel
Childhood crushes
Teenage first love
It's the hardest thing in the world
To get over a broken heart


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Written May 22nd, 2004

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  • Painful Expressions
    May 24, 2007

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    Beautifully Written

    You have beautifully expressed your feelingts and the feelings of so many young people today great job and thank you so much for sharing your talent with us....Michael

  • lifein not333
    May 22, 2004
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    wow. i can relate...really....great write.


  • hellizacomin
    May 22, 2004
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    Thanx. Girls espcially have hard times getting over first boyfriends. And this poem was written for my first boyfriend who is now my ex boyfriend. Even though I am finally over him, I still love him and will always have a place for him in my heart to come home too... when hes ready that is...


  • MissPriss
    May 22, 2004
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    Great Write!!! I think everyone can relate to this and understand it. First loves are the hardest things in the world and everyone has to go through it some time or another. Great Write