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Yr Beauty

This is what I see
when I close my eyes and think of you:

I see dead babies,
unborn & floating silently on
the waves of the womb.
I see red & screaming faces tearing towards me,
open-mouthed
& with fear all in their eyes.

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Written May 22nd, 2004

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  • Shannon
    May 26, 2004
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    oh just....wow.

  • angellique
    May 26, 2004
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    Wow, this is so vivid. And horrifying. I like that it's not where I expected to poem to go. I'm impressed...and almost speechless. Wow, that's about all I can say. Amazing job.