One of the best albums ever
A big freeway in California
The size of a porn star's cock (in inches)
Nice if it's in thousands
Normally around when I wake up
Painful, if you're a bottom
Two shy of a dozen
Great sum for a list
Pleasant depth for a pool
Not perfect, but close enough
Too early to call it a night
A time that death should avoid
My first kiss
Tag is still cool
And German dodge ball
Almost a party
One less than eleven
A gymnast's dream
and a swimmer's etc...
Too many kids,
dogs, cars, birds -
- girlfriends
Ten more than zero
Zero beside a 1
A smoke break in minutes
Double knuckle sandwich
Another reason to write
One more shit poem.
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Written May 21st, 2004
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Yep. there's lots of cool 10 stuff. And I must say I've experienced a lot of which you write....mostly pleasant , some not so pleasant. It's all good and true, up to the last line, if you're referring to this particular piece
It's really not a shit poem 
It leaves us each with our own imagination, our own reminiscing along with a glimpse into yours.
love and
Dee
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yes indeed
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Wow, even before I got to the last line, that's what I was thinking......no, not really but the thought would have lingered if it went any further.
Mindless thought, that is what this seemed to me. But, we all have them, and some of us commit them to paper, my thoughts are usually committed to a stray-jacket.
Hey, I thought that 'sharing a spoon' in Cambodia was supposed to be between you and I? lol!
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what ever do you mean? the coal thing or hmmm was it the cock thing? glad you like it!
Edited on May 22, 1:31 p.m. because ''. -
Gross, seriously.
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your it! hmm what's up with all this shit talk and anus talk lately, intresting, I told ed666 that if he put a piece of coal up his @$$ in a few months his worthless shit might be worth something, but I don't think he believe's me, lol, and is this about a 10 inch cock, or is my mind deceiving me once again, cocks and anal fixations, wow how did you know, did I tell you my butt hurt or something?
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Pearl Jam kicks ass, I'm sadly addicted to pornography, and you can fit 2 1/2 cigarettes into 10 minutes.
I liked this, in the hopeless feeling of boredom it had, I relate to it, somehow. I guess it's vibe.
Rock on,
WiLL -
i am going to paint a ten on this bald motherfucker's head...cheers from the magic lady so...must be a 10. i like the little interlude in the middle...recess...tag is still cool, so is dodgeball... then right back into the ten ten ten.
the magic lady really only liked this one better because of the 10 inch cock...opposites attract. -
the judges give it a 10 !!!!!! cheers!
I liked this one better than the last one.
guess I am understanding them better.
Kudos..... Cheryl -
Different for sure. Definitely a structure that works for this one. This starts out with a slam dunk sort of feel with the first few verses and carries that same sort of energy throughout. - an entertaining read on this one. I don't often get a bit of a laugh out of the pieces here, but this served more than a few.
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Original, as always. You have wonderful writing skills. Your poetry is fascinating and i love reading it. Sometimes though, I puzzle over a meaning or two, then wonder if I'm just stupid.
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