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Oh my darling big girl Crystal... megalong title



My Crystal,
my diamond

Crystal,
thank gosh
you're a puppy
I'm glad
you're not a pig

You're getting so big
I love you
with all my heart

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Written May 21st, 2004

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  • Dal Cuore
    July 19, 2004
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    this makes ame want to have a dog. good job.


  • sanity
    June 11, 2004
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    Awww, this is so good, a lovely poem for an obviously special little puppy............Thank you so much for sharing.........

    sanity


  • Beauty Sleeps
    May 22, 2004
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    Crystal sounds like a wonderful puppy... I have a friend with that name, except she spells it kind of weird... "Cristal"... And she steals boyfriends! Ok, anyway... This was a wonderful write... made me smile and wish that my dog wasn't so stupid! Keep writing!
    Kate


  • My Darkness
    May 22, 2004
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    I can't help but smile when i read about your puppy, since we share the same name..you obviously love this puppy very much and you write so wonderfully about her..keep it up and thanks for sharing

    take care

    -Stac-


  • buggirl
    May 22, 2004
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    aww, this is very sweet. Crystal must be a wonderful puppy. I have a dog, but he's really old and kind of dumb. very good poem, I'm glad Crystal's not a pig, too! great job.

    Jen


  • bambie k2004
    May 21, 2004
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    Oh Jer this is so wonderful..Like I said before you must really love Crystal..I had a big dog too..She just went to a new home yesterday..Her name is Flower and she is a Siberian Husky..What kind is Crystal? I have lots of dogs..Four of them now and three of them are going to have puppies...LOL But they are little dogs..not like Flower and Crystal..I wish you the best with your pet..
    Much love
    Bambie


  • Cemetery Rose
    May 21, 2004
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    AWWWWWWEEEE That is too cute! She sounds like a good doggie! this poem was cute and funny.....hahaha glad your not a pig! THats great! This is so fun!
    peace and love
    Susan


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    May 21, 2004
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    This is outstanding. Crystal is lucky to have you.

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