Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Sometimes Pity and Final CE Aren't an Option

Missing image
Some say her name was Peace Seeker
Who found and saw her peas
Transform right into lovely pearls
In prayer on bended knees

Margaret's pearls of peace shared thoughtfully
Throughout the realms of this cyber universe
She's known to speak forthright and honestly
In poetic and conversational verse

Margaret Irene Sonnet Sultaness
Figuratively speaking as a poet
Her pearls of wisdom Cerebral Magic
Transporting you in thought before you know it

Alas as so often boundaries do
Block and often distort picture's view
Two letters lost make a name anew
My friend became Peaseeker so true

Like a rose, is a rose, is a rose
Poet Peaseeker travels on cyber seas
Armed with her emerald broach pea pod
Adorned with beautiful pearls of wisdom peas

Author notes

1. "And sometimes, pity is not an option"

Peaseeker's strength reminds me of the above quote.  Like many of us she has had many reasons to throw a pity party but she doesn't have time since she's too busy making plans for happiness.

Note:  When choosing Peace Seeker for a posting name the space amount allowed would not allow CE and so Peace Seeker became instantly transformed to Peaseeker.  And that's the story in a pea pod.
Written May 21st, 2004

In a list

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 11 of 11

  • MargaretG
    August 3, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    Alice gave you the short form, this is my version!
    Peaseeker Found Her Peas by Peaseeker allpoetry.com/Poem/636336
    Edited on Feb 14, 10:21 p.m. because 'url'.


  • M.A.King
    August 1, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    a wonderful poem for a special person. true and beautiful. thank you for explaining the name! i always wanted to ask. now i know and it fits perfectly.

  • anne
    June 12, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    You portrayed her wonderfully! Your writing was elegant and your words were fitting. Thank you very much for this entry!
    -anne-


  • passionvine
    May 26, 2004
    Edit | Reply

    Well done

    Superior work all aorund. Great structure and a lovely tribute


  • Samplette gold member
    May 23, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    A peapod filled with pearls...I love it. I also love this wonderful write. You have an amazing way with words when you are lifting your friends up in love.
    Great work!!
    sam

  • MargaretG
    May 22, 2004
    Edit | Reply

    Applause

    Alice, pearls of peace and Irene fit in so nicely, you'd think they were always there! I tried to give another applaud, and the system stopped me, so Hurrah for you!!


  • Sara Bellem
    May 22, 2004
    Edit | Reply

    From your LivingRose

    Aw, This is nice, a great tribute & dedication to Peaseeker, I don't know her personally but I do believe I remember you telling me about her helping you delete some "stuff" off of AP, and for that I am forever in debt to both of you, As always WGCM, You have shown just how thoughtful you are in writing this & I wish you the very best in this contest, its first place in my heart ---WGCD


  • Maatkara gold member
    May 21, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    There ya go. I rest my case
    ~G


  • MargaretG
    May 21, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    I see your "name compulsion" and add one more! My middle name is Irene! Pearl of Peace!

  • Maatkara gold member
    May 21, 2004
    Edit | Reply

    Pearl of Praise

    Oh, Margaret, you are so fittingly blessed by your perspicacious and great-hearted friend! I concur whole-heartedly with everything you said, YesYouCan!

    I believe Margaret exhibits what Carl Jung termed "the compulsion of the name"...Margaret means 'pearl'...and she IS, in every sense.
    Way to go, ladies!
    Love & Light,
    ~ Ma'atkara

  • MargaretG
    May 21, 2004
    Edit | Reply

    Thank you!!

    Thank you, Alice for this beautiful poem!
    I am wonderfully surprised and grateful for this.
    How can I critique this? Only with praise!

1 - 11 of 11