One and only,
heaven and hell,
all of me waiting,
to be released from my shell.
I look to the light,
and am thankful for life,
I give thankness to God,
and wait for the night.
The night that I'll me him,
I know that hes there,
I've heard his sweet message,
I know that he cares.
Why do I believe,
because I'm here today,
but in him I trust,
my faith will not stray.
Author notes
Written May 21st, 2004
A contest entry
- Why Not Accept Christ or What Made You by PrincessOfFire.
400 points, ended May 24, 2004, 14 entries
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Comments
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This was a decent write. Your rhyming was done well. In the line, “The night that I'll me him,” I didn’t quite get that. Was there a typo there or something??
~ John
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beautifully written
this is awesome!!!!!.......i really love this portayal of your feelings about His love.......this is a beautiful piece......nice job.......
~~~~~~~~~~Stephanie~~~~~~~~
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Very sweet write, seemed you messed up a little on one line.(The night that I'll me him,) I think you meant meet him. God bless you
Thank you for entering my contest.
Rose
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