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Keep Me Hold Me Make Me Yours

Keep me. Hold me.
Make me yours
Teach me. Love me.
All I want
Is to be like you

Holy. Savior
Lord above all
Master. Redeemer.
Make me stand tall

Put aside my ways
To turn to yours
Open up my heart
Let you make me a new start

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Written May 20th, 2004

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  • Bradley Johnson
    May 21, 2004
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    awesome faith! i loved the first paragraph!
    Bradley

  • TrentisGod
    May 20, 2004
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    thats awesome many ppl these days arent very religious but u stick to it great poem again