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Oh! My Darling Crystal

Oh! My darling Crystal
I love you such
a very much

I just couldn't give you away
because I want you to stay

Author notes

Crystal is my puppy


Written May 20th, 2004

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  • freakonaleash
    June 6, 2004
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    how cute, this poem is adorable, great job on this
    -L8eR-
    ~EmmA~


  • Cemetery Rose
    June 4, 2004
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    Oh my! Is this a poem that I haven't written a comment on!?!?
    Well it is a lovely lovely write! YaY for puppies. She sounds like a wonderful doggie! (I want a puppy!!) Anyway thanks for entering!


  • UncleSpace
    May 24, 2004
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    Dogs are great...

    This is the cutest, I love dogs, especially puppies! YEY puppies Nice job! Please keep writing and always go back to it, you'll just get better and better! You might like my "Ben", about my Dad's dog. allpoetry.com/Poem/276045

    USpace

  • Jer
    May 21, 2004
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    We've had her since March. She is a puppy but is getting big.
    Thank you.

    ~Jer

  • Jer
    May 21, 2004
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    That is very wonderful. Thank you.

    ~Jer


  • RomanticHeart
    May 21, 2004
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    I have a puppy...cute write...i read it aloud and she started barking, i take it she likes it too! good write.
    One love, One Voice, One Pen
    Blessed Little One
    p.s. think ur gonna go on my favorite list.


  • May 21, 2004
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    awwwww! I wish i had a dog well, for a 6 year old this is fanastic! I will applaud this for you

    pinkwhite

  • NeNi
    May 21, 2004
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    AWWWWWWWWW..........!!!!! That is so precious!!!! Your puppy must be very special to you. Why not? If I had a puppy, I would probably want to write a poem about it too. Keeo it up. That was very cute. It made me smile.
    Good Job!!!!!
    ~*Whitney*~
    AKA
    ~*Neni*~


  • My Darkness
    May 20, 2004
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    awww my name is Crystal too!...i was hoping you would be talking about me, but i realized you weren't...i'm sad now...lol good job on this...

    take care

    -Stac-


  • bambie k2004
    May 20, 2004
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    Oh..How wonderful Jer..Your puppy must be very special to you..I bet she loves you as much as you love her..Is she new? Or have you had her for while? Great rhyme little man..You are the greatest .... (smiles)...Keep up your writing ... I love it!!!
    Much love
    Bambie


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    May 20, 2004
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    This is so sweet, and your first rhyming poem. Beautiful job, I am so proud.

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