by Gregg Rowe
I was lying in bed, reading a book
Joseph Conrad's ~Heart of Darkness~
Where from around the corner he gave me a look
I'm hooked from then on with his boldness
It was after supper and he was collecting the trays
He swished round the room with such expertise
His white porcelain smile just took me away
I thought to myself: ~Oh, what a tease!~
Later on in the evening he passed on by
JP's his name, head to toe dressed in white
A shaver in his hand, a twinkle in his eye
~Have you by chance, shaved tonight!~
I'm sure the rise in the sheet was not a surprise
As JP closed the curtains to give us some privacy
My eyes were fixated on his muscular thighs
Anticipating that moment of intimacy
He examined my groin and a nod of his head
Said I did well, but I had a few hairs
I felt my body swim on the bed
Thanking Aphrodite for answering my prayers
~We won't do it here,~ he whispered in my ear
~After midnight, meet me in the family room.~
I looked in his face and knew he was sincere
Knowing it's him I'm going to consume
Sleeping time, but I lie awake
Devised a plan to go on down
~Can't sleep, this book I'll take~
As I adjust my surgical gown
Head down the hall to the family room
open the door and light shines through
the reflection of a spring full moon
shadows the whiteness, waiting to screw
the blondness gives me a hard on
as I stare at his physique in the night air
his dick he already had withdrawn
just standing there playing solitaire
I inched towards him when I noticed the bed
laying upon it I signalled him over
he climbed on me and I sucked his head
within that second, we became one-night lovers
an hour we played and sucked and licked
the salt and semen of our bodies
nipples, balls, cocks, anuses were slicked
our passion now was an act of charity
then it had to come to an end
which was fine with the two of us
we came one final time, do not pretend
there's nothing to discuss
we dress ourselves in the bright moonlight
flip on our shirts, tuck in our soft cocks
zip up your pants, make sure we're not a sight
as we both glance at the clock
you leave first, turn around
give me that porcelain smile
like you're about to do the town
the twinkle says it's just your style
a few minutes later I walk down the hall
pass the nurse's station, bids goodnight
~hope you had a good time~, ~I had a ball~
As I disappeared out of sight
Author notes
OH, gawd, this was tough...I hate rhyming poems! wait until I come back because this nurse gets to shave me again next week...see there is a reason for everything n life!
Written May 20th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Touch Me~ Contest #3 of 9 by ShadesXofXGray.
300 points, ended December 19, 2005, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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BRAVO!
I am most impressed with this piece. You do not find many gay eroptic pieces here. You did an amazing job penning this piece. I must say once again I am very much impressed by it. It was soft, teasing, sensual, taunting, alluring and so much more I cannot even begin to tell you.
Congrats on a most deserving win!
Blessings
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FINALLY!! lol a gay guy poem...lol I am sick of hearing only about vaginas.. wonderful job on this
I love the rhyme and by your comment I can tell that it was sort of hard for you to do.. but you pulled it off perfectly and I am very pleassed with this entry.
wonderful job!
thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
Love,
Kid
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Oooh, kinky kinky kinky! Shame on you... hmmm, next week huh? Lucky lucky you!! lol!
Seriously though, this was a great poem. Awesome flow, rhyme, and just all around wonderful. The feelings were certainly ripe and well picked. And the background just adds to an already well enacted scene! -
It is an error, sorry my dyslexia caught up with me again. Fix it right away and thanks for the notice and informing me. Gregg
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hey,wow.this is good.and i like the rhyming.only thing that bothers me a lot-in stanza 3 you said"pj" and in 4 you said"jp".is that on purpose or is it a typo?lol.good luck in the contest.
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(shivering with pleasure)
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want that picture and I LOVED this poem. I want to be shaved by a hott and sexy nurse.
Continue the beautiful and HOTT work!!!!!
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Mmmmm. very VERY taisty erotica! lol. I loved it! at first I couldn't figure if it rhymed or not but half way through it I FOUND THEN RHYMING! lol. I'm kinda slow so forgive me! lol. Awsome visuale! I could see the whole thing as if it were a movie!
great poem n' good luck in contest!
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thanks for sharing? again...i'm not to keen on homo erotica but this is good. good luck in my contest!
Shana
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Oh Yeahhhhhhhh I think that it isd time for to check in, Awesome piece of work that you have done here, Just had to stop by and let you know, keep it up and thanks for sharing
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Woo..hot write my friend. Awesome..though the guy isn't my style. Too muscley
is that a word? anyway, your eroticas are always hot 
Love you babe have "fun"
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ya....i wanna do the picture...dont care if he is gay, straight or confused....
and you sir have quite the way with words...the line that captured me was...just standing there playing solitaire..what a wonderful way to describe masterbation...i think from now on that is what i will say...
what you doin...o just playing solitaire...hehe -
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WOW, I am happy for you... There is a reason for everything in life. Enjoy your next shave,
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oh my god, you kinky kinky poet.
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if that is the nurse, I would love for him to come and shave me.
gawks at the picture and can't even find her tongue for her comment
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Was defiently not what I expected. The write was good though. God bless you
Rose
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whoooooo... kinky... I actually rather like this... sounds yummy.
Hope you're doing alright!
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