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Day has come and day has gone

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by Gregg Rowe


Day has come and day has gone
When one more problem I will shoulder
As I continue the fight

I lay devastated on the hospital bed
Once a very strong soldier
As I continue to fight

I rose, dressed, went outside
Smoked two cigarettes
As I continue to fight

Bought coffees and masked my feelings
Booked appointments for all my tests
As I continue to fight

As I continue to fight



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Written May 20th, 2004

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  • capricornpoet
    July 15, 2005
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    everyday is hope

    Life is life as some say , fate is a dark follower, it watches
    love and despises , the soul goes on ;the soldier you are
    of fighting your pain,hope is always the way , .
    I do hope you win, here a sensitive spirit seen ..

  • meena krish
    July 14, 2005
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    In this short write you have shown the struggle and the will to live..fighting each step of the way without giving up. A moving write that holds the weight of sadness yet never falters. I'm touched by this write..take care~


  • wishintreeUK
    July 1, 2005
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    Gregg, it's the positive fighting quality about this piece that stands out proud! just a small write for you, yet it speaks volumes, your thoughts, feelings and your amazing strength are an inspiration to all, you have what it takes to reach your goal and you can be proud of that!

    Special 's

    ~Katie~
    Edited on Jul 01, 1:01 because ''.


  • nell
    May 25, 2005
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    this has a very powerful edge to it that sticks in the readers mind and tugs at their feelings - to me this poem hold many facets of emotions - so complete within its shortness - well done
    thanks for sharing
    shanelle


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 20, 2005
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    Gregg, there is a strength to this piece that truly shows. Of course, the weariness beneath shows as well, as do other emotions. But it is the strength, the trugging on that comes first and foremost here. That and the reality of it all, which is a powerful statement for everyone, not only others going through a situation such as yours, but going through many turmoils in life, if we all just take a moment to read between the lines and delve there, this truly applies to all humanity. Very well done, as always! I must apologize for not be around more, I'm away more than not lately, but I am trying to visit my faves and see what's new. So glad to see you are still posting away and hanging on my friend! You truly are an inspiration to us all. Blessings and Hugs, Gypsy


  • Watuwant silver member
    March 6, 2005
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    Keep on fighting, brother. It seems like the good fight never ends, but someday it must pay off, huh?
    Lovely poem!
    peace
    doug


  • infinite spirit
    March 3, 2005
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    hm. well i read what you wrote about yourself on your poeatry page, and i'm impressed. you're obviously tallented at more than poerty. i quite liked this poem, you have a way with words that really gets to me. your work is emotional and very well written.


  • SuZyCuE
    February 4, 2005
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    This is a very honest and emotion packed write, The will to continue to fight is a great one, one that will carry you through your trials. Excellent Write

  • pozo
    November 21, 2004
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    A powerful poem, you're brave but you probably already know this Good write- I liked this a lot despite it being really sad. Cool poem
    All the best,
    Keep writing,
    Your friend,
    Pozo


  • MagicLady silver member
    November 16, 2004
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    Gregg,
    you fight and fight.....you do, my friend.

    I had a bit of trouble reading this color font ...was tough on the eye. Guess I am getting old.

    I liked the strength you show in your poem and prose. My best wishes to you always.
    Cheryl


  • jenelda silver member
    October 22, 2004
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    You are continuing to fight, you always will gregg, you are a strong man and though the road seems long you will master it.
    Never give up Gregg, I know by now you have had your OP and that you are not better yet, but I have faith you will be. I want to read all your poems, it will take me awhile but I will get there Love to you Gregg-jennifer


  • MargaretG
    May 22, 2004
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    This is a wonderful use of the form and describes the trials you are going through. The fighting spirit that you and John describe is what keeps us going. Don't give up.
    Good luck in the contest, and in life.


  • Blue moon
    May 21, 2004
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    Hi there,
    I feel that this was a deep and very thought out poem. Well done and thanks for sharing. All the best to you and yours

    Blue moon


  • Samplette gold member
    May 20, 2004
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    A nice write.
    Thank you for entering.
    Sam

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