what is the point of living
why are we here
we serve no purpose
we don't belong
oh i remember...
the reason is you
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Written May 19th, 2004
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Wow, great poem- sweet and excellently written
Cool poem, keep writing because this was great
All the best,
Pozo
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lol
thank u
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Aaaw Becca this poem is so sweet and so heartful that I have to give you an applause for it
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its short and like someone said above me shows some emotion...i like it...see i have to make really long poems to get my point across your jus like bam there ya go and you go a excellent poem thats short but i love it..
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great little poem...
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well i love this poem thought i have already commented on it i wanna do it again coz i just love it so much and i love the way you set it up and i love wat it says
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oh wow this is different then your other ones...i found it...nice good job!!!
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Short, sweet, cute, I never had somebody love me in return though so I wouldn't know those feelings at all.
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beccy that is cute even though it took me so long to read lol
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This is such a cute poem becca its even better then my angel one i got hehehe and i love the border to
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great work
Short but sweet..I can feel the emotion in those few lines..I think of a person sitting by themselves,depressed and angry and thier love comes and taps them on the shoulder Then it hits the person and they realize the reason of thier existance
..Great job
Thanks for sharing
Lori~
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Very short, but yet very descriptive. Combines a few feelings, or to me at least.
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