Light and quiet
Soft and sweet
You gently whisper
“Goodnight.”
As you release
My hand
And walk away,
I begin to cry.
“Please don’t go”
You keep on walking,
Walking, not looking back.
I miss you,
I need you,
“Please come back.”
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Written May 19th, 2004
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Hey Annie it's Erica!! This is a really cool piece! Ur poems are so awesome!
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this is sad... good but sad.... i like how its not to long but still gets your feelings across well... great job
~will -
nice
Short and to the point. I like the quotation part. It shows the progression of this person leaving the subject of the poem -
This is beautiful.
Short, sweet and simple = exactly the way poetry should be nowadays.
Perfect!
<3
-Jen -
Mm...this was actually rather neat. It was short (as the last one I read)
I'm thinking that there is a deeper meaning than just the, "Mom, there is a monster under my bed, I'm afraid, please stay with me." sort of thing. Am I correct?
Chellie
xoxo -
Pretty cool.*nerdy grapefruit*
E=mc2
Ash -
Hey Annie that was very good i really understood it.
Please help me get the pig and the monkey.'
Okay great job on the poem.
Katelynn -
very short but easy to understand. i liked it. i think you did a great job. thanks for sharing, keep up the great work...
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