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Two Best Friends

Looking back to the day we met
And became instant friends
Cheering me up whenever I am down
Each day I know I can count on you
You'll pull me through the hard times

Amazingly I have found two friends
No one else could ever top
Driving me through each day

Hanging my hopes on our friendships
And knowing that I am safe to do so
Nothing could ever replace
Nights spent laughing
And hanging out at the malls,
Hugs to dry each other's tears

Irreplaceable friendships

Where will the future take us
I wonder
Leading to who-knows-where
Life can be so unfair

My heart tells me we won't lose touch
I hope that is true
Seeing as you are the best two friends, helping to
Shape my life for the better

Yesterdays are behind us
Over the winds of time we fly
Until we meet again...



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Bronze in wizzy jo's contest allpoetry.com/Contest/611681
Written May 19th, 2004

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  • sparkle100
    July 18, 2004
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    this is great thanx for writin itfor me and lacey!!! D :


  • Talia
    May 23, 2004
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    Over the winds of time we fly.

    I love that line such beauty in itself. Time changes people move on and away I hope you guys do stay in touch


  • Cemetery Rose
    May 21, 2004
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    Awwwwwwe too sweet! Congrats on bronze! You are just so amazing with these acrostics! I know that they will enjoy it and who would want to l;oose contact with an amazing person suchas you
    peace and love
    Susan


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    May 20, 2004
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    you can just use my author name on here


  • Wizzy Jo
    May 20, 2004
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    AAAWWW This is so sweet! Thanks so so so much for writing this I love it! awwww well done on this thanks so much for entering and also writing good luck in my contest, who would you like me to put this by at the end?
    Rowena Jo


  • My Darkness
    May 19, 2004
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    lucky...mmhmm

    i was about to knock lacey and hannah out, i thought that you were writing from you to them...lol i was like oh hell no... this is sweet, i agree, you have such a loving heart...give me a hug

    take it easy

    -Stac-


  • candy177
    May 19, 2004
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    This is so sweet - I love dedicating a poem to someone, it's really the best way of letting them know how you truly feel. I hope you don't lose touch with them - great friendships can be hard to come by sometimes.

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