I'll dye my hair
with fire
if it will catch
your glance
an extraordinary desire
the world's last chance
locked away in the cold
a legendary romance
and we can talk
for hours
if it means hours
without hate
a shadow to devour
a remedy to relate
we're confined to electronic waves
in this blinding estate
and for a pinch
of time
the war was
almost blocked
we derived an enzyme
catalyzed love on lock
together we made a heart beat
slowed the pressure of 'tick tock'
and for one second the world was saved
blanketed by an unfamiliar grace
it was genuine positivity we gave
because you happened to catch the mission
interred in my face
Author notes
Written May 19th, 2004
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I needn't say much more....I liked it enough that I would hug you if I saw you
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Wow. I know you wrote this a while ago, but I just happened to stumble upon it. I love it. I love the words, the phrases. Everything is just so good. You've got talent.
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Found this in low bid promos and clicked thinking it would be one of them horror things, GET IN THE CAR. But was pleasently surprised. Very sweet.
Desiree
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Excellent
Elegant, graceful, beautiful, the list goes on and on. I really loved this poem and i'm printing out a copy right now. The whole poem seemed to flow together and your vocab. was brilliant. I could sense the anguish and frustration with your overall message of watching the world fall because the eletronic waves were confined. My two favorite paragraphs were the second and the last. Well done!!!! -
nice i like it it was confussing at parts i admitt but i still liked it. it had a good stanza.! keep up the good work....c.baby
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