One failure after another
Im falling so fast
I can hardly breathe...
you try to pull me back
But i let go of your hand
For fear of pulling you down with me
Blackness surrounds me
no longer peaceful
violent and evil
So much pain
I can hardly bear it
What happened to all the light?
why did i drown like this?
I will never know...
But i Promised you,
I promised you that id pull through
And once again stand high,
To watch the sun sink below the mountains...
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Written May 19th, 2004
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o, i like this poem. you have an amazing and unique style. i am gonna go and read more poems. bye!!!
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Hmm.. i kind of abstracted how my grades really suck... ^^" glad you like it, this is probably my 2nd worst poem, if you liked it read "Footsteps" its MUCH better.
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I thought you said you sucked? LOL Anyways I really like this poem its very very interesting Topic...
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that was such an awesome poem! It was well written, everything flowed, and the poem was overall a masterful piece. Good Job!
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I really liked this poem. you can picture it as you read through it- I hope to read some more of your stuff soon-keep it up!
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Awesome!
This was a very well written. Your words flowed nicely and you described everything so well. Great job and keep up the good work! -
i like this one a lot nico... i can relate to it... i love the ending too its beautiful...
liz
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