Sometimes I feel I've committed a crime.
And sometimes it seems that I'm doing time.
Locked up in a prison,I can't break free.
It's hard fighting with the person I call "me".
Sometimes I feel I'll never escape,
Why can't I be a super hero with powers and a cape?
That would be too easy, and life is hard.
Sometimes I think I was dealt the wrong card.
But what can I do,but sit here and deal.
Try to be happy and talk about how I feel.
Sometimes it works, and sometimes not,
But I do my best because that's all that I got!
Author notes
Do you ever wish you had someone else's life cause your fed up with yours? That's what this is about.
Written May 19th, 2004
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Hi. You left a comment on my story. but i think you have mistaken me for someone else. lol. my name is marissa.
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good job sherry keep it up
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Well, maybe not someone else's, but a different one, for sure...I like this write. Good job.
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This was very good - yeah, I often feel fed up with my life and want to be someone else, alas that never happens...
Thanks for commenting on my poems!
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did you get my comment to you? It's not on here! I said thank you and i promise to come up the weekend after the first. I miss you tooo!love you~insane~
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Thank you for the comment!
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coolio
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Great write Sherry!!
You need to come visit us, we miss you...
I wanted you to come up this weekend so bad, I am now so sad that you are not!!
This was an amazing write as always, b/c you are a super person. I love you!!
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I really liked this poem! It was short and sweet and had a rhyme. It kind of seemed...almost UPBEAT because of the way that it rhymed. The rhyming was very well done and didn't seem forced at all except for this part:
Sometimes I feel I'll never escape,
Why can't I be a super hero with powers and a cape?
Seemed kind of cheesy. But that was the only oopsie. Aside from that, wonderful wonderful poem!
And thank you for all your great reviews on my stuff...I'm on superproductive mode today, lol
Much Luv,
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Thanks alot for your comment and applause.I'd applaud your comment but I barely have any points on this account yet,butTHANK YOU!~Insane~
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great
nice... i like this one... i really relate to it...im my worst critic...dealing with our own inperfections seems one of the hardist things in life. and of course, regret
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Thank you beautibug!
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Great!
Oooh! I love this one! You know exactly how I feel! Thanks for this one!
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thanks alot! yea,SOMETIMES it does bite...lol
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I think we all know this feeling. It bites but we've just gotta keep going. I liked the part about super hero powers. I definitely wish I had some of those at times. Great job expressing your feelings. Nice work.
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Thank you very much for you comment. I really appreciate it!!!!
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Super!
Hi InsaneJaneI loved this work! Well done! I feel the same way, most of the time! I think we all do! I hope things get better for us!!
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