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thoughts of death and suicide
used to haunt me
to die or not to die, u decide
i chose not
i dont know why
all my life consists of is drinking and smoking pot
i have nothing to stay here for
the friends i have are not true
im just wasting my time with this endless war
im sick of the bullshit people put me through
i hate their endess lies
but most of all i hate you.

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im not really what i was thinking when i wrote this because i wrote it years ago...
Written May 19th, 2004

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  • wonttakemeunder
    May 4, 2005
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    HAHA look, i applauded can u tell im BORED? n my fingers have gone all stiff cos theyre cold...yeh...but...OH MY LLAMA! i havent commented here yet...hehe...

    ..ahem..*puts on super duper (yes i just said super duper)fully sik totally RAD commenting voice*

    No really....I like this (even tho u posted it this time LAST YEAR.. ) i hope its not me ur hatin...TOO BAD cos ull have to put up with me...soon shit its only like...7ish months..n we'll be there....wow...neways...ill continue this in an email
    lool...

    k bye bye SUGAR PUFF ...

  • EvilMaster
    December 15, 2004
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  • Matthius
    December 15, 2004
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    Great work Becca, I applaud this poem it's "Xool".


  • August 30, 2004
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    I have felt this way myself...I hope you feel better now...Thanks for sharing~
    Scar Tissue


  • Demon God
    August 22, 2004
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    I felt the same before, and sometimes still do, thinking it best if I just did away with myself and made more room for other people. I won't say that 'I found the light' or 'god', or whatever. I just decided that I would live for the reason alone that others who didn't like me could go screw themselves because I wasn't going to let them win. Nice write, love how you ended it.

  • grapefruit
    August 14, 2004
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    wikid...i love this one...well not as much as some of the others but its still great!!! lol...gee wiz...what else can i say!!!


  • gUitaRDEdchicK
    June 15, 2004
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    yay

    heh. awesome. i like the relentlessness. all mY life consists of if drinKing and smoking pot. soUnds like me. awesome. tired of eveRybodieS BuLlshit, DonT waNna be here but promising Your life to somebody/something. yup. i feel it. --relating goes here-- so ya. awesome. i like.


  • June 9, 2004
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    Bravo!

    The lies are always the worst part. Your poem was the best one you've written here. And trust me you fucking kick ass girl. I liked that poem. The one thing i advise is going over the grammar in it and some of the others but your poem was great otherwise.
    Edited on Jun 09, 4:10 because ''.

  • SatansOnlyAngel
    May 19, 2004
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    REALLY AWESOME

    I SO LIKE THIS POEM ITS THE BEST HEHEHEHEHE ITS MY FAVOURITE OUT OF ALL OF YOURS

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