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I've fallen short, or
somehow just fallen;
I'm waitin' for an open, door
just sittin' here waitin'..
My heart's still on the floor
seems I haven't picked it up yet;
My dreams seem to soar
but this one, I'm still waitin' to get..
I feel so lonely, but still not alone
You're here for me patiently,
I wanna come back home...
And You just say,
"I'm here for you, darlin'
you know I won't leave, don't forget.
I'm still writin' up your story,
You'll love how it goes.
"Please don't forget,
to remember me,
I died so I could write you,
This story;
I lived for you, now live for me..."
My passions seem to drive me,
in all the wrong directions;
My eyes can't see clearly
I need someone to lean on..
I've taken the lead,
of a life that's not my own;
I've cried and still bleed
but I'll fight till You're known...
I feel so lonely, but still not alone
You're here for me patiently,
I wanna come back home...
And You just say,
"I'm here for you, darlin'
you know I won't leave, don't forget.
I'm still writin' up your story,
You'll love how it goes.
"Please don't forget,
to remember me,
I died so I could write you,
This story;
I lived for you, now live for me,
I lived for you, now live for me..."
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Author notes
this is something that God's kinda been telling me for the past month or so.. just with school and everything, it just didn't seem worth the work, i didn't see any real reason for working my tail off, but i found out that, well frankly, God's got other plans.
Glory to God!!
-ash
Written May 8th, 2004
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this is well unique and nothing i read often its sad theres no title for it yet and its great that you wrote something about god i mean not many people will and just ignore him so this is refreshing to see and read that someone would do this great job and woderfull poem
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Great job! I'm not good at naming poems. I can't even name my own. lol. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Great job! Keep up the good work!
God bless you,
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Crosseyed387
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A true Ashumally poem.
This is really a true Ashumally poem. True as blue, it is so you. (Hehe that rhymed) I read it before, and I'll read it again. Loved it, Ashums. Like Jar said, this poem really speaks for itself. I don't think I can say anything more about it that could make it more magnificent, except you should give it a title. Maybe "Fallen" or "Here for You" or "Live for Me" or... I dunno. You're better at this than I am.
Love you always, sweetie.
Eternally His,
Anna Rochelle -
WOW! what an awesome way to show how God is. He DOES write our story. But only if we let him. Hmm. Wow, i"m gonna let this one speak for itself. Great job!!!! God bless -Saab
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totally awesome dude
this is especially fitting for me right now with finals etc..i've been slacking off and i can't do that...i'm letting both myself and God down. He only wants what's best for me. great write, very powerful and i looved the background (just for say) .
God bless and in Christ,
Megan -
Wow Ash!! That was great!! So many times we try to take things into our own hands, forgetting that we have the greatest author ever working on our stories. This really struck a chord in me. It was great!
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amazing
Hey Ash, this is a great rmeinder about waiting for things in life and that God is totally in control, and i love the end, live for Jesus, what a great message
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