the earth so far in space
the earth so full with people
it's so great
let's celebrate
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Written May 18th, 2004
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Hi,
I feel that this was an awesome write, you ahve put so much into this. Wow and so young, so much description and imagery. Well done and all the best to you and yours
Blue moon -
prettyful
awesome, this is awesome...narf...lol... you described the earth in little words, but with great meaning. go you! unhuh, do a little dance...eh... sorry.. well anywho this is cute, great job and keep writing...
Twig.... I mean Heather...
xoxoxoxo -
I agree about the excellent work you have done in creating this, it is just wonderfully written......you have a true talent......keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your wonderful writing........
sanity -
wow, great poem, Jer! Very good rhyming, too. the Earth is great, and so are you.
Jen -
wow, outer space is really cool...i wish i could go sometime, maybe you could come with me?...
lots love
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You did an excellent job on this one. I am so proud of you.
~momma
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Jer this is wonderful..Great Job, little man..So well put..Your mommy's talent has been passed on I see..You will have to keep posting some more..Your little poems are so fun to read..You are awesome little man...Smiles...Keep writing
Much love
Bambie
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