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Let Me Let Go

You've held my heart
Right from the very start
I made the mistake of falling in love
Now that we're through it seems so clear
I have such a dilemma of the worst possible type
I broke the rules, the greatest one of all
Never fall for your best friend
Is what they always said
Because of who you are
I can't stand to see you go
But I don't want to feel like this
Let me let go darling, so I can move on
Let me let go baby please
Let me go free, and spread these glorious wings
Just let me let go

Author notes

I guess my thing here is that I feel somewhat bound to a former love and yet unable to make a decision as to what is more important. Feel free to comment or make suggestions. Thanks.
Written May 18th, 2004

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