Green on green ~
sunlit leaves and fronds
breathe perfume
Author notes
Just breathe....
Written May 18th, 2004
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Hood Winked!!
I do enjoy the peace and calm a seasonal haiku generates. Spring the season of renewals. Beautifully crafted. . Thank you for the pleasure of this moment.
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Ah, this is beautiful!!
After I read your author notes I thought of the song
" Just Breathe "..by Faith Hill
Very stunning indeed!
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wow, I think I missed this one. I could smell the air as if being there. Nice photograph and poem.
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Just lovely
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Thank you, Bezoar!
I'm glad you liked it.
~ G
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A lovely haiku. Green is my favourite colour.
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Applause right back atcha! That is a gorgeous poem you wrote here Tom
"Mother earth smiles colours of rainbows"...so lovely! 
Love & Sunlight,
~ Ma'atkara
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wonderful goddess of love and
beauty ~our "mother earth"
oh well done my friend ,,in my
rambling opinion ..
"breathe out Life's perfume"
lovely dreams
tender soft blue horizons
beyond our vision
in path of noble deeds
as slumbering souls trembled
in shivering gust of dawn
mother earth smiles
colours of rainbows
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This is really lovely. You do this SO well. I'm always amazed by the beauty of the haiku when you use it. Thanks so much for sharing this one. zee
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the last part...that has to be my favorite part. Which is often true in things like this I read but still that last line...you had me there...lifes perfume...thanks for the read!
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Thank you, Dee! Lovely verse too.
Isn't chlorophyll wonderful?
~ G
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You are right, M! It should be 'breathe'...Thanks, I forgot my leaves & fronds were plural
~ Gennelle
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Super
This is lovely, and it is just how it feels to me!
I'm wondering if you mean breathes or the plural? -
Thank you
Never have I seen photosynthesis
so beautif'ly rendered!
It's more by far. In warmth this is
God's fragrance tendered. --Dee
Edited on May 18, 4:35 p.m. because ''. -
yeah and the smell after a spring rain. That is my favorite. Fortunately here in Western Oregon we have green on green all year with the exception of a brief period in Late August and September.
Wonderful, you make me want to go out and wander about...
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Nothing as rejuvenating as green on green. Without green, souls would not be able to shed its carbon
... and its fragrance ...
Myra -
Yes, "Ma" is short for your handle. "Ma'atkara" supplies too many chances for typos. Don't worry, it's not one of those things like Ronald Reagan calling Nancy "Mother"...lol.
Scott
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Thank you, Scott (I hope the "Ma" is short for my handle )
~ G
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Very nice haiku. Simple and elegant. I believe you are a Mistress of this form. Well done, Ma.
Scott
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