the garden
garden so pretty
look at the birdie
Author notes
#5
Written May 17th, 2004
A contest entry
- #5 by Cemetery Rose.
300 points, ended June 12, 2004, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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It's great that you started writing so young. Great write for someone your age. Keep up the good work!
God bless you,
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Crosseyed387
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This is beautiful. i found ou through ch0colate, and am glad you got such an earlystart on writing wonderful poetry.
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Brilliant haiku! Though you said garden twice, maybe you could use a different word and what did the garden look like? were there flowers? did the garden smell of anything? well, I think this is good for a 7 year old anyway. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on getting the bronze trophy
NatureGirl ~
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OMG JER!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST!!! and i am sorry to be shouting but i am seriously bouncing in my chair, i love this poem so much!! not just loove, but LOOOOVE. its such a happy poem, so pretty and beautiful and SIMPLETASTIC!!(yes, simpletastic
) i love how its so short, because then it gives the reader a chance to twist the poem to mean/describe anything. WOW. i LOOOOVE this.
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congrats
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Ah one of my favorites!
Thanks for entering!!!
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Great job on this, you should write more poems...
I love this, it's my favorite from you!
take care
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I like it. Seems too short though. Keep writing.
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birdie I still use words like that! I loved this though! A nice little haiku. Leaves some room for the imagination!
peace and love
Susan
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Ok
this poem needs a few more lines (in my opinion) its hard for the reader to really picture what your talking about with only three lines
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beautiful garden
This is so good, I love it how it is, but I bet you can add a little more when you feel like it to make me see pretty pictures. Great job on this baby.
~momma
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