Chasing nimble and numb-
for who's to succumb
to the measure and maze
of thy oft-faring craze?
None for maids after noon
with the now-empty spoon,
naught as well for the cat
who fell just... like that!
Author notes
Inspired by another poem by "Chasingtheday". ARrrrrrrh...Thanks bud.
NOTE: This does NOT advocate drunkeness..ha!
Written May 17th, 2004
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Your poem bought a smile to my face - so you succeeded well - humourous & lighthearted - thanks - sue
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lol..thanks for the laugh-this is very funny! a pirate's life for me..lol..ok anyways laughs this is really good and i really like it..i think it flows well and that picture is really funny! awesome job-keep up the awesome work!
<3Ashlee -
Funny
I needed a laugh and that's what I got reading this. Great work. It's cute and simple. It's amazing how great a poem can be when you just let go and have fun. Great work here. I enjoyed reading your other work as well. Best wishes!
Kamilah
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Chasing is a fine poet...This is excellence... , olivia
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sneaky lol
and here's me just using the one id 
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ah yes, Ian has inspired me a few times as well. you did very nicely on this. I enjoyed it. btw, if you come to read mine, level two would be just fine.
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This about being on a ship and trying to get food? And the cat who has it easy? LOL I dunno, I guess I drew from the picture and tried to come up with sumpthing LOL something....Love,Sherry
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excellent
This is a great poem. I wrote a pirate poem for chasingtheday. He is a bloody pirate at heart. I will be back. Queen
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I like it, very well written. Chasing told me to call in and read this poem, but I will be reading more.
Take care
Elaine 
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hahaha it's a pirate life and aye the poor cat went splat i didn't realise one was inspired by my madness.
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