We dance in the rain
As the purple sky rises
Rainbows dancing free
Author notes
A Senryu...
Written May 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- Form poetry time! by TheRainKing.
300 points, ended May 30, 2004, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Memorys Yeah..
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what a great short write!!
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Rain and dance what a wonderful combination..
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I would most like to learn this form. This is good Senryu. Haley27
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heh...I forgot a word in the second line. ^_^
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purty!! ima full blown rainbow whore! lool... jk jk about the whore but the rainbows true... whats new kitten? nice poem though i likes. take care.
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[freek]
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wow that's kew even though i have no clue what a senryu is... hehe sowie, ~Death
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Aww this is pretty... What's Senryu? Hehe.. anyways, good job Kati, I'll see you at school or maybe just talk to you later.. keep up the good work!
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Oooh, Sock likes. Very pretty
I want to go dance in the rain but...it isn't raining here
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ooh i like.. i usually dont like short thingys... but i like this one...good job
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