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The Skies.

We dance in the rain
As the purple sky rises
Rainbows dancing free

Author notes

I would think this is a Haiku...It's about rain...lol...
Written May 16th, 2004

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  • Gingerandhoney
    May 29, 2004
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    This evokes beautiful thoughts. Perfectly formed haiku leaving wonderful lingering images. Good luck in the contest.


  • -theheartofme-
    May 19, 2004
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    Rain Is nature, and I like the idea of dancing rainbows, especially since when you move they do…dancing in the sky…yup…great description