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landing together

I see nothing but you as we lie together
floating in a everlasting world of bliss
my arm around you is like holding an angel
we are no longer hidden beneath the cover of pride
our love is open for others to see
you brighten my life as i do for you
it lights up the room of dreams
as our passion moves forward with a streaming flow
we become happy and land together in the garden of eden that is us
when we lie together all is together and none is lost

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Written May 16th, 2004

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  • skigirl6788
    May 19, 2004
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    wow, that was beautiful and passionate-- very nice love poem- tasha should read this!! Keep up the great work my friend!
    ~Christine~