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It was me

I said you didnt care
We were drifting apart,
All the words dried up...

Sitting here in the darkness
Wishing it wasnt so
Reach to no avail,
One light faded,
No one can see what ive done to myself.
Growing lonely, i didnt know how much i needed you...

Author notes

hard to write, because of the hiden message in the lines...
Written May 16th, 2004

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