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Calm before the storm

The sun is shining,
But tensions are rising.
Why hasn't anyone given in?
I can't stand it,
Where is the storm to wash it all away?

Silently stare at the sky.
Let the thunderbolt fall,
We're floating in midair,
Time stands still.
A false calm, an illusion.

Silently stare at the sky

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something i wrote a while ago
Written May 16th, 2004

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  • May 28, 2004
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    I like it... a lot