My english teacher
Is the best one ever
She´s so great
I´ll love her forever
She does more than teach
She´s always there
When no one else does
She´s the one to care
I only see her twice a week
That´s the one thing I hate
The other days are hard
I don´t have someone that great
She´s by my side when I need
She makes me feel free
And even when I don´t myself
She always believes in me
She always says that I can
She always says that I´ll make it
She says everything is possible
She says that I can break it
She makes life seem easier
She´s always there for me
If it wasn´t for my english teacher
I don´t know where I would be.
Author notes
Guys, tell me what u think about think poem... right???
Written May 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- teacher, teacher, I declare ...... (Contest for new members in May) by AP Greeters.
300 points, ended June 2, 2004, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A sweet, innocent tribute to an obviously special teacher. I've had good teachers before, but never someone of this emotional calibre (except, maybe, when my parents taught me, lol). Nicely done
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Guys, on my screen there´s no space bin theses words... That´s not My fault!!! You know what I mean...
Love
Barbie -
Nice tribute to an English teacher. Yes, I agree with Barbara with that apostrophe, seems a little skewiff, but never mind. Just one tiny thing to look at is the syllable count in each line, if you can make them the same, or a half, 3/4, or 1 1/4 it would make each line tie in better with another, anywho, nice stuff, good luck in the contest, Dave.
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YAY! English teachers are the best
My favourite teacher was my English teacher because she was so inspiring and more like a friend.
Treasure her and remember her always, your admiration for her made a lovely poem
Good luck and thanks for entering
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Beautiful poem with a wonderful rhyming flow. Although, for some reason on my screen, there is a space in she 's, don 't and I 'll that takes something away from the overall flow of the poem by making the word look like two separate words.(wonder if it's just my screen?)
Welcome to Allpoetry and good luck with the contest
Edited on May 23, 10:10 p.m. because 'typo'. -
A special teacher this is. Take notes and follow in her positive foot steps.
Nice poem about an impressive leader! Thank you, Warmly, CookieZeal -
I agree with gemini - she must be truly special. I hope she knows how appreciated and loved she is, and what a wonderful influence she has had on you
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Your teacher must be an incredible person for you to feel this way about her. this is a lovely tribute to her and a good entry- thank you and good luck
~Von~
Edited on May 19, 7:19 p.m. because ''.
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