I saw you wrap her in your arms,
I saw you kiss her lips.
I heard you whisper,
I love you.
You heard me crying,
And you didn't say a word.
You just covered her ears,
So she wouldn't know you were such a bastard.
I pulled out that gun,
Aiming it at your head.
And that is when,
I shot you dead.
I saw you hurt me,
And rip out my heart.
You heard me crying,
And you did nothing.
So as I sit here watching you die,
I don't feel your pain.
All I feel now...
Is the pain inside of me,
For loving you...
Author notes
Nothing like guys who cheat..I was cheated on but I didn't kill him. I don't have that kind of heart.
"Cherish me forever"
Written May 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- Tear My Heart Out by Silent Siren.
400 points, ended May 20, 2004, 36 entries
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Great write
This is amazing..same thing happened to me but what i wrote about killing him i kept to myself :| this showed your emotions so well ..my favorite part was "All I feel now...
Is the pain inside of me,
For loving you..." just because all the guys i have claimed i loved (im only 14 i only think i love people at this age) have dumped me or cheated on me and everytime i felt that well thank you for writing such a great poem
much love
casey lyn -
Awe, hun, I'm sorry to hear about such a painful act done to such a sweet soul, why, why, why???? Do people hurt others like this...
I'm here for ya sis, and I love ya... 
I hope all is healed within your soul quickly, for you deserve better.... You deserve the best as a matter of fact!
Thanks for sharing, and heal soo!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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