Steel clashes
Horrors unfold
In the heart of battle
The blood runs cold
Vision blurs
Through a haze
A blood red mist
Lost in a craze
A leader rises
Gathers his men
Surges forward
To fight again
A parry here
A cutting slash there
Men die at his blade
Enemies beware
Ahead looms a Dread Knight
In black armor he stands
Cold, untouched by battle
Gleaming sword, in ghostly hands
Tunnel visioned
Only one opponent seen
Battle instinct takes over
The duel starts, both are keen
Circling one another
The Knight slashes
Lightning reactions
The leaders sword clashes
As steel meets steel
The duel rages
Shallow wounds
But the fight still blazes
Knocked to the ground
He must not fall
The leaders dazed
But the gods hear his call
Sword flaring blue
The ghostly Knight senses danger
The leader gets up
No longer does he weaver
The Knight hesitates
Here's the leaders chance
Rushing forward
He ends the deadly dance
Left standing in the field
Enemies are no more
The battles won
But there's still the war...
Author notes
My first poem in a fantasy type genre, hope u enjoy and be HONEST with comments.
Wild Child
Written May 16th, 2004
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Interesting poem. captures the spirit of battle very well. i see you have used onamatapias! and i f you dont know wat they are then... scotts a retarded butmonkey
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This is the same poem you wrote at my house, its realy cool.
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Wow great poem. I love the last two stanzas there both amazing. Great way to finish your poem. All good. I'm glad you told me you had added it. Now u gotta add your philosophy cuz thats all good. hehe. But great poem!! Keep wrriting. Lurrve beki
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hey sweet poem (dnt mean sweet in the girly way lol) got some good flow, nice structure too, wow i can finally think of summit descent to say
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i like this poem...its descriptive and different to your other poems. good write. luv ya. xxx
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