Write of beauty
or of strength
Maybe freedom
choose the length
Write of friendships
secrets told
Some are silver
other's gold
Write of day dreams
wishes true
How `bout natures
perfect view
Write of flowers
or of snakes
It matters not
what it takes
Write of Sunshine
or the Moon
Just get writing
make it soon
Author notes
Not sure if it wil help or not, but I tried...hopefull someone will inspire you..
Written May 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- Inspiration by RoseBlossom.
300 points, ended June 7, 2004, 19 entries
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okaay
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Well thank you so very much for such a praising comment. I did just get a book of my spiritual poetry published.
search.barnesandnoble.com/booksearch/isbnInquiry.asp?z=y&isbn=1424143985&itm=1 if your interested. I want so much to glorify God...
Sam
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100% genius
Are you sure you're not a professional writer?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????? As my multiple question marks may have told you, that poem was incredibly, incredibly good, you should publish it. It is short and sweet and your rhyming is flawless. It is a beautiful poem. I wish I could write that well. (sigh)
Never Quit writing, ever
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You are the Robert Frost of our age, I mean it. No joke, this is incredible, inspirational and beautiful. I am not a very complimentary person, but I must say this is one of the best poems I've read in a long time
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I like the point that you make at the end, just get writing and make it soon!!
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light-hearted
it would certainly inspire me.itis done in such a light and breezy frame yet it is full of care and concern.i like the way it takes the direct approach. -
It must give inspiration to someone, write about anything that comes in mind, don't be afraid of rhe paper and pen
Nice and with a very soft flow!
Good luck in the contest!
Mari
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lol...ok...thank you very much!!
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it was clever how you cut the 'a' from about in the 3rd line 3rd stanza, just so it would flow with the meter, yeah not bad.. but not really my style of writing or reading, i just noticed that little thing...
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This is cute . . . I like the variety of ideas in this poem. I think this could be quite a good inspiration.
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Beautifully written
Sam,
Beautiful poem you have written here. It is very inspirational as it makes me want to write something but unfortunately I guess I have writers block and nothing is coming to mind except if I force it and I don't want to do that. Great background by the way. Good luck to you in the contest! Hope you win.
May the colours of the rainbow follow you always.
Smiles always,
Kristina
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Sweet!
Such a light and witty poem! The meter and rhyme are lovely, except for the hiccup at "or rattlesnakes".
This all great inspiration for poetry, you are kind to give it away!
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