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I Used To Be...

I used to be
A cloud,
Casting quiet shadows on everyone's sunnyday.
But now I am
A tempest,
Raging my fears openly to the world.

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In the style of an "I used to be..." poem.
Written May 15th, 2004

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  • FallenForever
    May 30, 2004
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    yeah k? barbie? ok....
    quit peeing on everyone! how many time do i have to tell you, peeing on everyone does not help the floors stay clean! you use water! lol
    Fallen-

  • Barbie Cute Pie
    May 15, 2004
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    Hey..Thanks for comenting on my poem... Yours r great too... If u ever need to talk, talk to me, k??? Love,
    Barbie