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Canablitzed

[Basement]

Putting the tequi -
- la worm in the bong water
felt wise at the time.

[Front Room]

"Dude, are you gonna
pass that fucking joint or what?
You nigger lipper."

[Drive Through]

Today, somewhere, four
stoned teenagers drove off with -
- out their change, or food.

[Freeway]

Upon missing the
exit for the fifth time I -
- gave up, and went home.

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Written May 15th, 2004

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  • olddrivelandrubbish
    November 26, 2005
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    chezyproperganga

    well... thats one weed perspective sure...
    if it got me like that - ide quit though
    my operating system is improved immesurably by thc and my carrier - that real world stuff has bennefited immesurably to
    the only thing i stay ungreened for is my kids
    they are probably to young to see the benefit...
    lost what i was saying (lol)
    peace


  • Huntress silver member
    March 11, 2005
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    Hey that could have been me


  • haikumonk gold member
    May 26, 2004
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    clever group.... enjoyed immensely.

    Don


  • Sinfiend
    May 24, 2004
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    This is fucking sweet, I actually laughed when I read this, probably because they're all things I could imagine either doing or seeing, and while their realistic in that surreal, drug-soaked sense, they're also humorous without making them pointless. Great writes.


  • cvillelisa
    May 17, 2004
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    hey, how'd you know?????

  • zara
    May 15, 2004
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    hahahahaha

    I quit smoking dope probably before you were born. But something in me really enjoys that you young'uns still indulge.

    These are the days.


  • horus8 gold member
    May 15, 2004
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    It's a short novel by DH lawrence.


  • May 15, 2004
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    no, is it poetry or prose, and if poetry, may i find on Oldpoetry?

  • horus8 gold member
    May 15, 2004
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    Ever read allen millers the Fox?

  • horus8 gold member
    May 15, 2004
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    No, thank you for sharing.


  • May 15, 2004
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    fucking hilarious. thanks for sharing.

  • TheOneRomeo
    May 15, 2004
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    Well ain't it an ad for air freshner??..Damn if isn't so I would have really liked to read a poem about those fresh tools.Actually I like this subject even more,kind of funny story line you got in this writing of yours.Keep on writing and smoking.Peace!


  • horus8 gold member
    May 15, 2004
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    I take it by you clicking on the title you thought it was an ad for air freshner?

  • horus8 gold member
    May 15, 2004
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    I don't need luck, I'm nude.


  • MagicLady silver member
    May 15, 2004
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    I never click without commenting, but I guess I am why passed those days. Not sure I ever had those days. Good luck.

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