Each of your glances melt me so,
reaching deeply into my now aroused soul.
The flirtations we share, such teases we are,
from my end to your end of this big empty bar.
My craving flesh reaching across urging you,
come to me, make love to me, make my body feel anew.
When I feel your touching of my lips, I seem to melt,
you make me feel things, I've never felt.
Two moving mouths, roaming free upon each other,
tantalizing, stimulating, taking me further.
Probing tongues, searching, tasting, delighting,
making inside me feel so extremely exiting.
Our roaming hands, full and erotic,
cause our bodies to become spasmodic.
Tangled bodies in lustful heat,
As we both melt upon this sheet.
Our quenchable lust, now complete,
Oh what a sinful, sultry treat!
Blissful sleep overcomes us both,
as if we'd taken a solemn oath,
That upon a shameful wake,
our love will once again began to quake.
With just a glance, a lonely daze,
and once again my body you graze,
All for one moment I'm lost in your world,
and in your arms, I wish to stay curled.
I will never want of another's love,
for yours surpasses all above.
So wanting, I dream of being in your willing embrace,
so that I can whisper again, I love you, to your face.
Author notes
Written May 15th, 2004
A contest entry
- Inspiration by RoseBlossom.
300 points, ended June 7, 2004, 19 entries
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aw this is so sweet. goddamn i wish i had someone to write somethin like that about. meh oh well.
this was a great poem, i loved the rhyming. gave it a lil extra oomph. keep writing and ill keep reading.
rock on & on
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WOW' Beautifull done and love the bckground you chose, fit the poem really well. Soft and sensual, calm and serene, like an air floating and everything in slow motion. Very visual. Touching ending.
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My Comment: Very beautiful in presentation, the format is great and the flow smooth. The senusality does shine through the words whole heartedly, I don't find it too erotic, but I do find it very sensually done and it is a stunning piece to say the least. Especially with the time constraint as the other judges pointed out. You really have done an outstanding job on this. Bravo and best of luck to you
Star Blaze's Comment: This is like a dream, the way it flows through the poem. I find it quite sensual for sure. -
yummy and i love the background on this as well, it adds to the sensuality of the words above...great job
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very hot and sexual piece especially with the time constaints.
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